JESSE HINGSON’S GENERAL RUBRIC FOR
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY IN HISTORY
|
10 |
9 |
8 |
7 |
6>0 |
THESIS |
Easily
identifiable, plausible, novel, sophisticated, insightful, crystal clear. |
Promising,
but may be slightly unclear, or lacking insight or originality. |
Unclear
(contains vague terms), appears unoriginal, or offers relatively little that
is new; provides little around which to structure the paper. |
Difficult
to identify and may blend restatement of obvious point. |
Has
no identifiable thesis or an utterly incompetent thesis. Shows obviously minimal lack of effort or
comprehension of the assignment. |
STRUCTURE |
Evident,
understandable, appropriate for thesis.
Excellent transitions from point to point. Paragraphs support solid topic sentences. |
Generally
clear and appropriate, though may wander occasionally. May have a few unclear transitions, or a
few paragraphs without strong topic sentences. |
Generally
unclear, often wanders or jumps around.
Few or weak transitions, and there are many paragraphs without topic
sentences. |
Unclear,
often because thesis is weak or non-existent.
Transitions confusing and unclear.
Few topic sentences. |
No
evidence structure or organization. |
USE
OF EVIDENCE |
Primary
and secondary source information incorporated to buttress every point. Examples support thesis and fit within
paragraph. Excellent integration of
quoted material into sentences.
Factual information is incorporated.
|
Examples
used to support most points. Some
evidence does not support point or may appear where inappropriate. Quotations are integrated well into
sentences. Some factual information is
incorporated. |
Examples
support some points. Quotations may be
poorly integrated into sentences.
There may not be a clear point.
Moderate amount of factual information is incorporated. |
Very
few or weak examples and factual information.
General failure to support statements, or evidence seems to support no
particular point. |
No
attempt has been made to incorporate factual information or interpret primary
and secondary sources. |
LOGIC
AND ARGUMENTATION |
All
ideas flow logically; the argument is identifiable, reasonable, and
sound. Author anticipates and
successfully defuses counter-arguments; makes novel connections which
illuminate thesis |
Argument
is clear and usually flows logically and makes sense. Some evidence that counter-arguments
acknowledged, though perhaps not addressed.
Occasional insightful connections to evidence are made. |
Logic
may often fail, or the argument may often be unclear. May not address counter-arguments or make
any connections with the thesis. May
also contain logical contradictions. |
Ideas
do not flow at all, usually because there is no argument to support. Simplistic view of topic, and there is no
effort to grasp possible alternative views.
Very little or very weak attempt to relate evidence to argument. |
Too
incoherent to determine. |
MECHANICS |
Language
is clearly organized. Correct word usage, punctuation, sentence structure,
and grammar; correct citation of sources; minimal to no spelling errors; absolutely
no run-on sentences or comma splices. |
Sentence
structure and grammar strong despite occasional lapses; punctuation and
citation style often used correctly.
Some spelling errors and at least one run-on sentence, sentence
fragment, or comma splice. |
Minor
problems in sentence structure and grammar.
Multiple errors in punctuation, citation style, and spelling. May have several (two to five) run-on
sentences, sentence fragments, and comma splices. |
Huge
problems in sentence structure and grammar.
Frequent major errors in citation style, punctuation, and
spelling. May have many (more than
five) run-on sentences, sentence fragments, and comma splices. |
Very
difficult to understand owing to major problems in mechanics. |
*This
rubric is a composite of several rubrics used in several American and World
courses taught at